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which was working titled
_Connect the Multiple PoV_
This was started in June 2011 and was close to a finished state by October/November, so... even though I'll work on extending this later (doesn't feel like I've got the right finish/capstone yet), it's about time for more than just two people to have read this.
Failing that...
This started as two self-imposed exercises, one of which was a progressive subverting of 4-line end rhyme schemes, to create it's expectation and withdraw it. it was also an exercise in trying to be observational of the world around, aiming for mutiple points of view. As there are no strong characters, this is perhaps not a blatant element in the writing anymore, becoming more stitched sequences than a multiplePoV tale.
_Connect the Multiple PoV_
This was started in June 2011 and was close to a finished state by October/November, so... even though I'll work on extending this later (doesn't feel like I've got the right finish/capstone yet), it's about time for more than just two people to have read this.
Failing that...
This started as two self-imposed exercises, one of which was a progressive subverting of 4-line end rhyme schemes, to create it's expectation and withdraw it. it was also an exercise in trying to be observational of the world around, aiming for mutiple points of view. As there are no strong characters, this is perhaps not a blatant element in the writing anymore, becoming more stitched sequences than a multiplePoV tale.
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Well, I likited the initial part. It coursed me to remembird the aviannealing in this writing of mine, which you should be able to conquer:
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Butie digress, for the rest it distressed my crest on a personull levhell. There were some miniscule mentionings that synaesthestically traumatise me and my post-traumatic mindarts, so I had to stop reading half way through. Sorey.
You're paramount though, and completely fuckin erudite with your spooneristic, twolfold sections and I highly commend you.
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Butie digress, for the rest it distressed my crest on a personull levhell. There were some miniscule mentionings that synaesthestically traumatise me and my post-traumatic mindarts, so I had to stop reading half way through. Sorey.
You're paramount though, and completely fuckin erudite with your spooneristic, twolfold sections and I highly commend you.